Daniel Evaderix

B2B conversion copywriter

Offer positioning, landing pages, and sales copy. I find the argument that sells and write it into every asset a buyer touches.

A finance-education brand with 400,000+ YouTube subscribers had sent 773 email campaigns to 59,000 contacts without one sale attributed to email. I rebuilt the offer story and rewrote the campaigns. Opens doubled, clicks quadrupled, and 19 seats of a $497 masterclass sold from email.

CASE

One engagement, start to finish. Numbers as reported by the client.

Finance education · 400K+ YouTube subscribers · $49/mo software · $497 masterclass

773 campaigns, zero sales from email. Then 19 from my pen.

What I found

The list had 59,571 contacts, 44,000 of them active. The account held 773 sent campaigns, 71 automations, 52 lists, and 127 tags. Every broadcast went to 25,000+ people and opened at 5 to 10 percent. A segment of recently engaged contacts already existed inside the account and opened at 24 to 32 percent. Nobody was using it.

The paid class was sold as more information, in direct competition with the founder's free videos. The page promised outcomes without a mechanism, ran a countdown that had hit zero, embedded a preview labeled with a different product, and carried a guarantee that contradicted itself in two places. The main site's paid call to action led to a "free trial" that then asked for $7.

The free content, the software, the community, and the paid class were four products with four pitches. No sale had ever been attributed to email.

What I did

Signed up, went through the funnel as a subscriber, and pulled the account data before writing a word.

Rebuilt the offer story as one system: the videos teach the principles, the software applies them, the community keeps you consistent, and the class is supervised application with correction and accountability. That's the only thing free content can't give, so it's the only thing worth paying for.

Rewrote the campaigns as steps of that argument instead of a sequence of sales blasts. Built the lifecycle audiences the account already had the data for: former customers, trial non-converters, and lead-magnet downloads, with precedence rules and live-flow exclusions so nobody gets two conflicting campaigns.

2xopen rate
2xpost-open engagement
4xclick rate
19$497 seats sold from email, from zero on record

SERVICES

I sell the argument and the words. The message comes first. Every asset below carries it.

Your product is good. Your pitch is what everyone else says.

Offer positioning and messaging

I go through your funnel as a buyer, pull your conversion numbers, and read what your competitors say to the same person. You get a written diagnosis of where the message fails and the offer story that fixes it: who it's for, what they get that they can't get free, and why now. Every other engagement starts here.

Written diagnosis Offer story Messaging hierarchy

People arrive and don't buy.

Landing and sales pages

Outcome, mechanism, proof, and guarantee written as one document. The page that answers why anyone should pay when your free material is already good, and that doesn't contradict itself between the promise and the fine print.

Sales pages Landing pages Website copy

Every rep tells a different story.

Sales assets

One-pagers, decks, call scripts, proposals, and case studies. One message carried the same way through every touch, in English and Spanish.

One-pagers Decks Call scripts Case studies

You have the audience. The emails don't move it.

Campaign and launch copy

The words for a launch, a promotion, or a sequence, written as one argument across every send. Standalone copy engagements only. If you need the sending, the segmentation, and the deliverability operated for you, that's evaderix.com.

Launch sequences Promotions Outbound sequences

Message first. Send the funnel and I'll tell you where the argument breaks.

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METHOD

I call it Applied Persuasion. It's three steps.

01

Read it as the buyer

I sign up, buy the low-ticket product, and go through the funnel as a prospect. Screenshots, not assumptions. Most broken arguments are visible from the buyer's seat before anyone opens a spreadsheet.

02

Diagnose on your numbers

Conversion by step, by segment, by offer. I was trained as an economist. I don't write until I know which number is the problem and what the competing message is.

03

Write, ship, measure

Fix the offer story, then write the copy that carries it. Measure against the number from step two. Keep what moves it, cut what doesn't.

ABOUT

I trained as an economist and learned to model behavior with numbers. Then I spent a decade learning what the numbers leave out.

Two-time national debate champion. Coached debaters who reached the world university championships. Cofounded a fintech startup in 2017 and pitched it by phone across industries that had nothing in common except a buyer on the other end of the line.

I started Evaderix in 2021 to do one thing: understand a market better than it understands itself, then write only what the evidence supports. I work in English and Spanish, from Mexico, with clients in the United States.

WRITING

The Art of Understanding

Client Psychology • 6 min read

Beyond demographics and psychographics: the obsessive pursuit of truly knowing your market.

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From Economics to Persuasion

Personal Journey • 7 min read

How modeling human behavior with numbers led to understanding people through words.

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SEND ME YOUR PAGE

Email me the link to your site and your main sales page. I'll reply with where the argument breaks and whether I'm the right person to fix it.

daniel@evaderix.com